In Virgin Arms

IN   VIRGIN  ARMS    

Like first love, snow is always new, unstirred,
Always  innocent, always pure.
Silent  now  the  melodies of the bird, 
No echo rings through the boughs demure.

Branches make it clear in black and white
Snow wants to retain its secrecy withal 
A private place  -  none to intrude,  to invite
To disrupt our love, release the thrall

Draped in soft thick  blanket, each latticed arm,
Each limb and finger, completely dressed
In a gown of purity, light cover to charm,
Takes my love, gives me rapture,  is twice blessed.

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Entered in John Freeman's Contest   -  Pictures of winter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Love these lines, "Like first love, snow is always new, unstirred, Always innocent, always pure." Like beholding a virgin, free of all contamination of men's mistakes, Sid. Thanks for sharing your gem. Agape, Moses
Quigley Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 8:53 AM
I love the analogy of comparing snow to love. Beautiful lines my friend. Congratulations
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 5:25 AM
Wow....what a nice spin on a fresh snow...congrats on this awesome entry...lines flow with descriptive beauty! Love, Gwendolen
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:25 AM
Congrats on your win this is lovely x
Mehta Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 3:30 AM
Nice expressions on the first snow which is twice blessed, Sydney
Poet Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 12:39 AM
It's a beauty .Wonderful images of first love comparing it with ever white pure snow you have drawn.Enjoyed-kashinath
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