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In Union

I kissed you soft in the sunlight
You held me tight in the night
Together we blazed the fires
Of our darksome souls so bright.

You wrapped your heart in mines
And I felt your love so strong
A new rare joy has just begun
Beating our hearts as one.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/24/2013 9:39:00 AM

Mustapha, thank you for expressing and bringing these hearts that beat as one to the soup.. lovely SOFT imagery. nice passion on hand... xox~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2013 3:48:00 PM

thanks for visiting so many of my poems the other day. I had no time for Soup yesterday and now I am trying to catch up at least once to each poet who visited me!!

Donna Jones

Date: 10/20/2013 10:51:00 AM

Ahhhh.lovely my friend...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2013 7:24:00 AM

- So romantic and beautiful .... love it!! - Have a beautiful weekend! - Relax! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/19/2013 4:29:00 AM

Great tribute to a great lover. Inspiring poem. Thanks. JM

Christine Phillips

Date: 10/16/2013 12:31:00 AM

"Together we blazed the fires" Nice line.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/14/2013 4:33:00 PM

You are a romantic.How beautiful these verses are...: )

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/14/2013 10:29:00 AM

sensual and simply lovely M.M brilliant write love it so much love Shadow xox smile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2013 8:56:00 AM

what a gem this is!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/12/2013 6:14:00 PM

This is a beautifully written poem, Mustapha. Very heartwarming! I loved the form of quatrain that you used here. And, the fact that you only wrote two verses, shows great restraint. I admire that! Wonderful work!...Thank you very much for the nice comments, once again!