Mustapha Mohammed Poet Quatrain

In Union

I kissed you soft in the sunlight
You held me tight in the night
Together we blazed the fires
Of our darksome souls so bright.

You wrapped your heart in mines
And I felt your love so strong
A new rare joy has just begun
Beating our hearts as one.   

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Poet Destroyer A October 24, 2013 at 9:39 AM Mustapha, thank you for expressing and bringing these hearts that beat as one to the soup.. lovely SOFT imagery. nice passion on hand... xox~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2013 at 3:48 PM thanks for visiting so many of my poems the other day. I had no time for Soup yesterday and now I am trying to catch up at least once to each poet who visited me!!

Donna Jones October 20, 2013 at 10:51 AM Ahhhh.lovely my friend...

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2013 at 7:24 AM - So romantic and beautiful .... love it!! - Have a beautiful weekend! - Relax! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose October 19, 2013 at 4:29 AM Great tribute to a great lover. Inspiring poem. Thanks. JM

Christine Phillips October 16, 2013 at 12:31 AM "Together we blazed the fires" Nice line.

Charmaine Chircop October 14, 2013 at 4:33 PM You are a romantic.How beautiful these verses are...: )

Shadow Hamilton October 14, 2013 at 10:29 AM sensual and simply lovely M.M brilliant write love it so much love Shadow xox smile

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2013 at 8:56 AM what a gem this is!

Kelly Deschler October 12, 2013 at 6:14 PM This is a beautifully written poem, Mustapha. Very heartwarming! I loved the form of quatrain that you used here. And, the fact that you only wrote two verses, shows great restraint. I admire that! Wonderful work!...Thank you very much for the nice comments, once again!

Karen Anglesey October 11, 2013 at 4:14 PM Visually romantic and elegant flow. Well done :)

Nette Onclaud October 11, 2013 at 11:03 AM warming my cold, rainy night, mus... enjoyed how this flowed with flickers of romance... :) huggs

Sara Kendrick October 11, 2013 at 8:47 AM Ahhh!! Great passionate and romantic work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta October 11, 2013 at 12:46 AM Very interesting soothing write, Mustapha. Marriages or unions made in heaven

Arthur Vaso October 11, 2013 at 12:04 AM You set the bar very high, this is another great poem!

Donna Jones October 10, 2013 at 10:25 PM Sound like a new love.... :-) great poem this evening Mustapha..

Liam Mcdaid October 10, 2013 at 3:41 PM sweet and beautiful piece dear friend always a pleasure in reading