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In Umber Darkness

His audience floated while shadowed in umber darkness of the concert hall Upon his dusty piano, a spotlight glowed as his musical notes cascaded in a waterfall He faltered then stopped near the end his wispy presence slowly faded away I've given up the pretense of trying to pretend I still hear him as he sits near me to play

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/16/2018 11:04:00 AM
remember my dear, you cannot forget but you can pretend...Nicely done...
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Date: 6/15/2018 3:50:00 PM
Nicely crafted Laney...I can feel the umber duskiness...you have a way with words, my friend, lol...seriously...love and light always...^WW^
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/15/2018 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Winged One. I like your comments, silly or serious.
Date: 6/14/2018 10:07:00 AM
I feel the sadness of missing someone who is no longer with us. Nicely written, Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/14/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thanks so very much, John.
Date: 6/14/2018 10:04:00 AM
your imagery is outstanding I got chills down my spine reading this beauty I can almost hear the piano playing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/14/2018 10:50:00 AM
To feel the words of a poem is the highest compliment you can offer a poet. Thank you, dear friend.
Date: 6/14/2018 9:50:00 AM
Breathless. Gorgeous emotive piece Lin xomo
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/14/2018 10:49:00 AM
Thank you most sincerely, No.

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