In Tropic Breeze

Friendly palm tree waves
back to passing ocean surf
from its island home

9.23.18
Contest: Haiku in the Tropics
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry. That lone tree seems lonely. Thanks for stopping by my blog. Sara
Doll Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Wonderful imagery, Jesse. Well done.
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 6:43 PM
I love this personified picture!
Beckman  Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 7:59 PM
This reminds me of Florida, I lived there for many years. Nice poem!
Rowe Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Good guess. That is where I live currently; near Tampa. Thanks for the comment.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace