In Torrant Weather

Thanks alot not waiting for me
Getting dressed, it just takes time
I did agree to come and see You
I didn't want to wait in line
Look at You, not at Your best
I have seen You looking better
Why are You here so all alone 
In wind and torrant weather?
Where have they all gone?
So what!? They didn't even wait
By now You've made the journey
Walked into God's holy gates
If it wasn't for the weather
You would not have been so late
I guess I need remind You
Next time around I'll mark the date
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 2, 2016 at 1:10 AM
very good write, Amy. LINDA
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August 18, 2015 at 11:31 PM
Amy, I like this very much SKAT
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