"in Time"

There is no better feeling then making a person feel bright....
To lift some one's spirits when they are down and not feel right...
To show them a better place where balloons fly without strings...
Where shadows stay away and doors open without a ring...
A place where popcorn and candy are still for kids...
Where you can speak your mind and everyone gives...
A vision of hearts that still beat to love songs...
Where mistakes are forgotten and scars don't last long....
Helping a friend who may have lost there way....
But most important to show them a better day...
A walk in the park with no words to be said...
Just me rambling thoughts that drift in my head...
I will hold you close and chase away all the bad....
Because it breaks my heart whenever I see you sad....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pattison Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Enjoyed this, nice choice of words. Gavin.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 12:41 PM
A great intro line Michael and the rest of the poem just gets better and better.. a fantastic meaning to every line and one to consider for happiness each day.. a place where balloons fly without string.. I luv balloons and they symbolize fun and freedom to me... a perfect poem from the White Knight.. enjoyed..with luv from the "Sweetheart" .. also a new favorite..
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June 16, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Such a sweet write, so lovely, enjoyed your write..p.d
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 4:39 PM
How uplifting, Michael. You should enter this in the "making lemons into lemonade" contest! You seem to have mastered the knack for doing just that. Love, Carolyn
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