Contest- 20-26-03-15 Write a Beautiful Shadorma- sponsor Constance La France- 3/17/26
Your brown eyes that I see warmly pull me in hold me close inviting me in silence to share this moment how tender and gentle this love holding us so spellbound causing the world to vanish when eyes drown in eyes overwhelmed measuring passion with a kiss touched softly held tightly in wondrous arms intoxicated
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