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In This Wildnerness


In this wilderness I see Direction
where God’s truth sifts the leaves
and sings humanity’s song of Belong.

Where Alone 
never leaves me empty or afraid, 
where guardian energy is spoken 
by the trunks, the branches, the eternal green 
of these life-giving trees—
where the eyes of living beings 
brighten as they reach the havens
of the love-flowing rivers—
where Pain and Purpose are both found 
in a mother bear’s unwavering strength. 

Where the mountains stand so brazen—
I hear the beings of the forest 
speak of His genius—flocks of birds
flying in uniformity and unfathomable rhythms—
the heart of Truth is in His creation 
where Love never ceases to inspire. 

Let me rest where the trees upward gaze,
seeking your setting sun in the eyes of waiting night.
In Your Trust I can end the day on a drifting breeze—
in Your Trust I can fully be at blissful ease,
as You pave the paths to imminent Peace. 


Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/17/2025 7:07:00 AM
Laura, nice to see you can feel the relationship we have to nature. It's a wonderful capacity to be able to make this connection. The world can be a wonderful place if we see it correctly and act as custodians rather than exploiters. Smiles!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/22/2025 2:52:00 PM
I wrote this for someone who wanted me to blend God and creation. I don’t really write about God much, but I believe He’s present in the beauty <3
Date: 2/7/2025 8:43:00 AM
: ) how excited in reading this true beauty of a poem, in seeing God's presence surrounding and manifesting within the depths of the soul, beautiful scenery captured on the outward earth but much more abundant inwardly <3 : )
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/11/2025 11:39:00 AM
Glad it brought you some excitement Stephan. I do appreciate your smiles that grace my page. <3

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