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In This Place

In this place, I find solace from my worries and care This place where the guns bark, but still I have no fear A meeting with loved ones, memories sweet fill my heart Though I find peace and happiness, wish we were not apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/7/2010 8:10:00 AM
This poem has a haunting sadness "this place where the guns bark, but still I have no fear" it speaks of great inner strength, you have a gift for words~~
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Date: 10/29/2010 11:18:00 AM
I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Joy. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:35:00 PM
lovely write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:29:00 AM
nice expression.. the guns barked still remembering the feelings of love, Joy
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