In This Moment, Tonight

In tune with this familiar vibe, let’s wonder how it might be
Across the room our eyes will meet, a set of four
In a place setting reserved for two, captivated
Our everyday routines and thoughts will speak
Through the eyes, uninhibited, grooving in the same skin

Once upon a raging fire we’ll celebrate
The memory of that zing thing, we'll watch as it
Circles slowly into softer flames, flickering
Well-suited as old comfortable shoes
And continue enveloped in life's mystical sound

More sensible, aware of the need to be inward
Or outward at different times, we'll find pleasure
In being tired wild things, slowing down in our swings
If it breaks and cracks we’ll pledge not to notice

So, just for the sake of thinking that it might not last
Before it’s even begun, let’s just wish upon hope
Until we meet, and vow to be good to each other
In this moment, tonight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dahlusion Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Love is poetry, and it is exhibited perfectly in this poem that throws dazzling light on the subject. Bravo, Poet!
Clemons Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Beautiful poem, Karen. The setting is deeply described. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
Young Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:10 PM
I agree with Michael, that was my favorite line. It gives a real sense of where the words are coming from. Nice one!!
Anglesey Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Gina, thank you very much for the kind words :)
Mohammed Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 5:44 AM
I liked how you''ve penned this Karen. This is one of those writes that draws the reader in.
Anglesey Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Mustapha, thank you for the nice compliment :)
Ainsley Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 9:09 AM
I really love"tired wild things slowing down in our swings" It captuers my feelings of being in my sixties and still thinking I am in my twenties or thirties. And so it goes. Be happy my friend Karen ! Your poem has touched me and made me smile.;Michael
Anglesey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Michael, thank you for the appreciative comments and visit :)
Pritts Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:07 PM
This poem was a "zing thing". The thoughts that cross through young lovers minds. Hoping to become old lovers finds. Memories not lost but buried in stone. Islands to visit when left all alone. Hopes for tomorrow that fade into past. A friendship forever that always will last. I need to write that down. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for making me think. Rockman :-)
Anglesey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Thank you for the in depth review. Much appreciated
Young Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:37 PM
I love the subtle image of our inside vs. our outside. Nice write!!
Anglesey Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:39 PM
Gina, thank you for the nice comment :)
Barton Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 10:07 PM
I loved this one Karen gives the reader a great mental picture thanks for sharing
Anglesey Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 7:07 AM
Madelin, thank you for the nice comment :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
Anglesey Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Sara, thank you, I appreciate the congrats :)
Widjanarko Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Lovely karen! You always know how to knit wonderful words :) glad to read this beautiful moment of yours :) hug, yanny
Anglesey Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 6:28 AM
Yanny, thank you for the lovely compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Mannan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Oh this is beautiful Karen. Many warm congrats for the win.
Anglesey Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Tahera, thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate it ! :)
A   Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Karen.... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ PD
Anglesey Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 6:26 AM
PD... thank you for visiting ...always a pleasure to see your beautiful eye :)
Richards Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 8:11 PM
Oh wow.......I love this message of the true power of love that is nothing, without respect, knowing each other with, loveliness that is more than sensual because of honoring that vow. Love this
Anglesey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 8:38 PM
Carrie, thank you for the lovely interpretation. I get many of the same feelings from it ...thank you !
Morgan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Anglesey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Thankyou Morgan... I appreciate the visit :)
Adams Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 2:28 PM
awesome win....a great big congrats!
Anglesey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 2:35 PM
Sandra, thank you for the acknowledgement :)
Singaram Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 11:07 AM
Beautiful and simply amazing ! - Sekar
Anglesey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Thank you for the lovely compliment :)
Ryerson Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 3:37 AM
Whew!...Well done Karen! (lucky guy!) 'Souper' congrats to you - Tim
Anglesey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Well Tim, thank you, we are all lucky if we happen to find that kind of acceptance. thankyou !
Maverick Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 11:25 PM
Enjoyed this write full of peace Karen, many thanks for your latest visit Joe..)
Anglesey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Joe, thank you for the compliment. :)
Jordan Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations! It's a beautiful poem, deserving of a win. I especially like the line, "In being tired wild things, slowing down in our swings." It just feels right... Jack
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Jack, appreciate your gracious comments and your beautiful writes :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Not surprised to see you in top spot, a wonderful piece.
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Richard... I am totally surprised by the 1st place and very honored to read such a wonderful comment :)
A  Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Hi Karen, a SOFTLY SENSUAL winning poem... Love ~ SKAT
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:45 PM
SKAT.. I appreciate your visits and comments :)
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 6:38 AM
- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Karen! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Anne Lise, thank you for the glowing review. Much appreciated :)
Cee Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:36 AM
amazing...
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Thank you very much for the visit :)
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:55 AM
Gasun Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:35 AM
This is a very lovely and excellent write my dear friend Karen. Kudos! I love it and so enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind visit in my latest work. Have a great wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Leonora, it's very nice to read your gracious comments. Thank you :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 10:05 PM
I enjoyed even more the second time, it makes me think of aging lovers and how physically we undergo changes and offer each other grace and just see the beauty in each others eyes.
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Oh wow Richard, you expressed your perception in such a lovely way. thank you for the kind comments :)
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