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In This Moment

In this moment, choosing release We thus give birth to freedom's seed Doing nothing, as we unfreeze Head and heart allow love to lead God’s love and light is our soul's need With no cravings left to appease Yielding neither to fear nor greed In this moment, choosing release This life's a gift, from God on lease And with His laws, having agreed Praying to Him, to bless us please We thus give birth to freedom's seed Flowing gently, our will we cede Devout, standing firm like the trees Our heart is pure, where bliss beats breed Doing nothing, as we unfreeze Love in love with love holds the keys Our soul's ascent soon gathers speed We feel bliss amplitude increase Head and heart allow love to lead Oh hermit, voice of conscience heed Gentling thought, load on heart decrease We’re living light, why act weak kneed God within enables with ease In this moment 07-March-2023

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Date: 3/7/2023 3:57:00 AM
Hang on, you wrote two rondeau redoubles in one sitting? That's just showing off :)
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Date: 3/7/2023 4:40:00 AM
Hahaha! The first one (this one) I like better but didn’t have perfect rhymes as required :)
Date: 3/6/2023 6:27:00 PM
very loving words, enlighning poem, i appreciate yann
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Date: 3/6/2023 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, yann

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