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Coffee! Coffee In the Yawning. Pour straight from the pot. In the dawning - deep fog of brain. Lifting of the breakfast cup. Pour straight from the pot. Open very wide, the eyes. Lifting of the breakfast cup along with a grape jelly donut. Open very wide, the eyes - the ebon clearing. Along with a grape jelly donut, have a great big gulp. The ebon clearing in the dawning - deep fog of brain. Have a great big gulp. Coffee! Coffee in the yawning. 8/8/2022 non-rhyming pantoum

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Date: 8/9/2022 2:13:00 AM
Always in for a cold/hot coffee, though I make sure I don't get addicted to it. I am feeling sleepy right now ,guess it's time for a cup of coffee! Great write!:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2022 6:23:00 AM
I like a cup in morning. :)
Date: 8/9/2022 12:57:00 AM
I love coffee but can't have it on doctor's orders. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2022 6:23:00 AM
Hugs~ Kim
Date: 8/8/2022 8:55:00 PM
I love this poem and its title, Kim. I'm a great fan of coffee, too. This is a fave for me. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2022 8:56:00 PM
Thank you so much! I had fun writing this! :)

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