Kim Rodrigues Poet Pantoum

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In the Yawning

Coffee! Coffee In the Yawning.
Pour straight from the pot.
In the dawning - deep fog of brain.
Lifting of the breakfast cup.

Pour straight from the pot.
Open very wide, the eyes.
Lifting of the breakfast cup
along with a grape jelly donut.

Open very wide, the eyes -
the ebon clearing.
Along with a grape jelly donut,
have a great big gulp.

The ebon clearing
in the dawning - deep fog of brain.
Have a great big gulp.
Coffee! Coffee in the yawning.

8/8/2022
non-rhyming pantoum

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Komal Walimbe August 9, 2022 at 2:13 AM Always in for a cold/hot coffee, though I make sure I don't get addicted to it. I am feeling sleepy right now ,guess it's time for a cup of coffee! Great write!:) Kim Rodrigues August 9, 2022 at 6:23 AM I like a cup in morning. :)

Victor Buhagiar August 9, 2022 at 12:57 AM I love coffee but can't have it on doctor's orders. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues August 9, 2022 at 6:23 AM Hugs~ Kim

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 8, 2022 at 8:55 PM I love this poem and its title, Kim. I'm a great fan of coffee, too. This is a fave for me. :) Kim Rodrigues August 8, 2022 at 8:56 PM Thank you so much! I had fun writing this! :)