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In the Wind and Rain

in the wind and rain leaves blow across the garden - - a caged bird watches written 6th November for Tania's Winter or Fall haiku contest

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/1/2020 1:10:00 PM

It is very easy to see the scene you have painted Jack. Very nice :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/23/2019 12:36:00 PM

Nice imagery on this haiku Jack. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2019 4:58:00 AM

A wonderful haiku... Lots of imagery in this one..

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 7:04:00 AM

Lovely imagery. Congrats on your top win, Jack.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 8:06:00 PM

Back with congrats on your high winner in the contest, Jack! ~ Freed Bird

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2019 4:01:00 PM

beautifully descriptive Jack, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/8/2019 8:04:00 AM

Great haiku! Congratulations on your top win Jack, xomo

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2019 7:23:00 AM

I pity that bird, Jack! He too wishes he could be flying around free like those leaves! A really good haiku...no wonder it's on the winners' list! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2019 4:37:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/7/2019 8:23:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2019 7:43:00 PM

so glad it scored high for ya, Jack, Congratulations.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/7/2019 6:59:00 PM

Nice haiku Jack! So sad isn't it. Congratulations on your top win. Charlie

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2019 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/7/2019 3:14:00 PM

An awesome haiku Jack, great imagery, congratulations on your top placement in the contest and thanks for participating!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/6/2019 10:42:00 PM

provocative write Jack... the poor little bird must be worried to not be able to fly south as he sees all the warnings that he should be leaving.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/6/2019 8:24:00 PM

I like this 'snapshot' you've taken us to with your pen as camera. Nicely done, Jack! Cheers, Gershon

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2019 7:28:00 PM

Do you think they wished they were free :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2019 7:28:00 PM

this is EXCELLENT haiku, Jack, Seriously. I categorize this one as REAL KU!!!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/6/2019 5:36:00 PM

Darkly evocative, gave me shivers-

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/6/2019 3:37:00 PM

Must be a far off dream...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2019 3:05:00 PM

Kind of sad. Are you the caged bird? Enjoyed reading your work. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara