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In the Wind and Rain

in the wind and rain leaves blow across the garden - - a caged bird watches written 6th November for Tania's Winter or Fall haiku contest

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FJ Thomas

Date: 1/1/2020 1:10:00 PM

It is very easy to see the scene you have painted Jack. Very nice :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/23/2019 12:36:00 PM

Nice imagery on this haiku Jack. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2019 4:58:00 AM

A wonderful haiku... Lots of imagery in this one..

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 7:04:00 AM

Lovely imagery. Congrats on your top win, Jack.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 8:06:00 PM

Back with congrats on your high winner in the contest, Jack! ~ Freed Bird

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2019 4:01:00 PM

beautifully descriptive Jack, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/8/2019 8:04:00 AM

Great haiku! Congratulations on your top win Jack, xomo

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2019 7:23:00 AM

I pity that bird, Jack! He too wishes he could be flying around free like those leaves! A really good haiku...no wonder it's on the winners' list! Congratulations! Regards // paul