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In the Wind and Rain

in the wind and rain 
leaves blow across the garden - -
a caged bird watches

written 6th November for Tania's Winter or Fall haiku contest

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FJ Thomas

January 1, 2020 at 1:10 PM

It is very easy to see the scene you have painted Jack. Very nice :)

Phyllis Babcock

November 23, 2019 at 12:36 PM

Nice imagery on this haiku Jack. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Silent One

November 15, 2019 at 4:58 AM

A wonderful haiku... Lots of imagery in this one..

Line Gauthier

November 13, 2019 at 7:04 AM

Lovely imagery. Congrats on your top win, Jack.

Gershon Wolf

November 10, 2019 at 8:06 PM

Back with congrats on your high winner in the contest, Jack! ~ Freed Bird

Jan Allison

November 8, 2019 at 4:01 PM

beautifully descriptive Jack, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 8, 2019 at 8:04 AM

Great haiku! Congratulations on your top win Jack, xomo

Paul Callus

November 8, 2019 at 7:23 AM

I pity that bird, Jack! He too wishes he could be flying around free like those leaves! A really good haiku...no wonder it's on the winners' list! Congratulations! Regards // paul