In the Wind

Happily little Suzy prances
freely in the wind,
contrasted by tomorrow's
scattered ashes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Faulkner Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 10:33 PM
This is stark and complex, very moving-
Lamoureux Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 8:50 AM
This is a sad one. Hugs Rick.
Ligon Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 12:31 AM
Yes, the contrast between life and death is abrupt and can affect any age.
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