In the Western Sky

The tangerine sun sets in the western sky, for eventide has come and bestowed ease- I sense the seagull’s echo in the breeze as he lifts off the dock to fly. Psalms sway as the day closes, for the sea cascades as the tide reposes. The tangerine sun sets in the western sky.
I chose #2 October 5, 2019 Joseph May Make it Seven Poetry Contest
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Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:17 PM
Gorgeous, LU Loo. Congrats on your win
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 11:35 AM
lovely imagery LuLoo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:54 AM
Your poem is lovely; the imagery projecting a feeling of mellow calm. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
May Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 7:10 PM
Very nicely rendered Lu Loo, Congrats on your win..
Adams Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 6:40 PM
beautiful penning my friend...congratulations on your win :) hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:03 PM
Another gorgeous poem and amazing imagery. Blessings and love to you, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Lovely, LuLoo.
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