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The tangerine sun sets in the western sky, for eventide has come and bestowed ease- I sense the seagull’s echo in the breeze as he lifts off the dock to fly. Psalms sway as the day closes, for the sea cascades as the tide reposes. The tangerine sun sets in the western sky.
I chose #2 October 5, 2019 Joseph May Make it Seven Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/22/2019 5:17:00 PM
Gorgeous, LU Loo. Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/21/2019 11:35:00 AM
lovely imagery LuLoo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2019 9:54:00 AM
Your poem is lovely; the imagery projecting a feeling of mellow calm. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/20/2019 7:10:00 PM
Very nicely rendered Lu Loo, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/20/2019 6:40:00 PM
beautiful penning my friend...congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 10/5/2019 10:03:00 PM
Another gorgeous poem and amazing imagery. Blessings and love to you, Gina
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Date: 10/5/2019 3:54:00 PM
Lovely, LuLoo.
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