In the Waters I Seek

In the waters I seek 
      The face of the ocean 
      In the sullen abyss  
 
Deep down the gulf 
      Uttered the belch of memories 
      That swallowed me whole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dutta Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Grand and Great. Only sis small lines speak lots. Best Wishes. Anisha D
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Both stanzas transmit powerful images, Hans; very expressive! ~ Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 4:06 PM
DEEP one. You have written some really great poems this week!
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