In the Twilight Looms

In The Twilight Looms


Livetrap waits alone
        Daybreak descends to capture
Spirits lost in fog



For Raul's "Nature's Breath" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Knop Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Wow, Jimbo! Great Haiku! Good luck for the contest! Thank you for your comments and have a great time!...Gert
Segal Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 7:25 AM
I agree with Charmaine! Excellent!! love Simone
Knop Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:37 AM
Wow, you captured it with this Haiku, Jimbo! Excellent write and thank you for your comments! Have a great week ahead...Gert
Chircop Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:01 PM
Excellent view..Charma
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