Olusegun Arowolo Poet Than-Bauk

In the Twilight

In the twilight
As the night falls
our sight hindered

Yet our love stays
As moon rays spread
nerve frays with night

Fresh sea breeze blows
As wave slows down
~heart flows with joy.


Olusegun Arowolo
CONTEST:'Than Bauk A Twilight' sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Sara Kendrick April 19, 2012 at 4:26 PM Great work..Congrats...Sara

Debbie Guzzi April 19, 2012 at 3:51 PM Very good & dreamy too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2012 at 5:25 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

Diana-Marie Bombardieri April 18, 2012 at 11:05 AM Congrats on placing number one! Enjoyed:)

Joyce Johnson April 18, 2012 at 10:57 AM Well done. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce

Joseph May April 18, 2012 at 9:45 AM congrats on your win

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 18, 2012 at 5:50 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win xx

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2012 at 7:37 PM You did very nicely with this type of form. Hope you score well in the contest.

Deborah Burch April 12, 2012 at 8:24 PM Very nice Pal!!! nothing like the moon by the sea at twilight for love... ;) good luck in the contest...big huggsss,love deb

Joseph May April 12, 2012 at 4:53 PM this is a very nice Than-Bauk ...well done...regards...Joseph