In the Thorny Eyes

In the thorny eyes
Truthfully I stared right through
His broken glass, in thousand pieces 
I redeemed my might... for the pain he felt                Plain my night
Not a memory inside, just an empty cloud
Clinging for something more prudent  
For old times...
Is it me my heart longing for a cracking sound!
Is it me my heart pleading for the softest songs
Yes your heart has been once brutal...
Banished and forgotten...
Though to me in thorny eyes I see you, standing fatally
Comfort is what I’m here to mender you...my love
In thorny eyes, you captured my laugh
In thorny eyes you conquered my life
Hardly believed, for your old silly mistakes...
Known by your cruelty acts...

I will cover you in many colours of light
Crystallize your world in different stars  
And cross my heart, for old times...
To reverse 
In thorny eyes...I loved.END

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/22/2013 9:25:00 AM
Very moving writing and unique metaphors! Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love
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