In the Stillness of Noontide

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Amid the stillness as racing time grinds to a halt, I watch the steady hustle and bustle of noontide. Up above, phalanx of birds fly about in the vast spring sky until they disappear in the far distance. Red emperor tulips hula-hoop to the song of the breeze. I pay rapt attention to my surroundings; incessant, the sound of cars whizzing by on the road to destination unknown. I listen to unseen wind chimes tinkling sweet music for me. From the balcony, I look down at the neighborhood children as they play enthusiastically, and their laughs bring a bright smile to my face; then I wonder to myself... "Gee, how beautifully alive is life?" COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(15) any theme any form contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 06/20/2020

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2020 5:33:00 PM

This poem reveals the beauty poets see and are able to express Edward. It speaks to all those who appreciate nature. Beautiful! Blessings xxoo

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/20/2020 5:49:00 PM

Thank you very much, Connie:-) Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2020 5:24:00 PM

Is that your Navy picture? I was in the Navy too! Your poem is a fave for me, my friend! Love the shape and the words. I’ll take some of those red-emperor tulips!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/20/2020 5:44:00 PM

Thanks, Kim! From 1997 to 2001.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2020 5:33:00 PM

Thanks for your service! I was in from 1979 to 1987. How about you?

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/20/2020 5:29:00 PM

Yes, that's my Navy picture, Kim:-) I was 19 years old when that was taken! Thanks for your service! I'm glad you loved the poem! I appreciate the fave, my friend!