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In the Stillness of Noontide

Amid the stillness
   as racing time grinds to a halt,
      I watch the steady 
         hustle and bustle of noontide.
            Up above, phalanx of birds 
               fly about in the vast spring sky 
                  until they disappear 
                     in the far distance.
                        Red emperor tulips hula-hoop
                           to the song of the breeze.
                              I pay rapt attention 
                                  to my surroundings; 
                                  incessant, the sound of cars
                              whizzing by on the road 
                           to destination unknown.
                        I listen to unseen wind chimes  
                     tinkling sweet music for me.
                  From the balcony, I look down
               at the neighborhood children
            as they play enthusiastically, 
         and their laughs bring
      a bright smile to my face; 
   then I wonder to myself...
"Gee, how beautifully alive is life?"


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Date written: 06/20/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:33 PM
This poem reveals the beauty poets see and are able to express Edward. It speaks to all those who appreciate nature. Beautiful! Blessings xxoo
Ibeh Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:49 PM
Thank you very much, Connie:-) Much appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Is that your Navy picture? I was in the Navy too! Your poem is a fave for me, my friend! Love the shape and the words. I’ll take some of those red-emperor tulips!
Ibeh Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Thanks, Kim! From 1997 to 2001.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:33 PM
Thanks for your service! I was in from 1979 to 1987. How about you?
Ibeh Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Yes, that's my Navy picture, Kim:-) I was 19 years old when that was taken! Thanks for your service! I'm glad you loved the poem! I appreciate the fave, my friend!
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