IN THE SPRING OF CONFUSION: A TANKA DUO

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IN THE SPRING OF CO FUSION: A TANKA DUO

Tree-branched bird staring,

Looking me right in the eyes;

We both confused:

Humsn and natural nature,

Inhibiting springing peace:-

Wars' twofold nature:

Destructive storms and bombings;

Both dooming in spring:-

God's spring cleaning is coming;

Let us get to sowing peace.

Tree-branched bird staring, Looking me right in the eyes; We both confused: Humsn and natural nature, Inhibiting springing peace:- Wars' twofold nature: Destructive storms and bombings; Both dooming in spring:- God's spring cleaning is coming; Let us get to sowing peace:-

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