In the Soup

Bad boy
Annoy

Did speed
Smoked weed

His dad
So mad



Date written: 12/23/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 10:45 AM
And in hot water too! Great story in a few words, Edward! Nicely done. All the best! Blessings and peace to you.
Ibeh Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Thank you, Sam:-) Blessings to you, my friend!
Mitra Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 1:53 AM
Yes indeed in a soup....congrats on your win Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, Carol:-) Have a blessed day!
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 2:06 PM
Fun footles, Edward! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 12:40 PM
oh this is a fun one!!
Ibeh Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 11:35 PM
Thank you, Andrea:-) Happy New Year!
Sands Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 6:24 AM
lol Great footle Edward! I hope you have a Happy New Year :)
Ibeh Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 7:09 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-) Glad you loved it. Wishing you a Happy New Year as well!
Milgate Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Makes me laugh so hope he does not get into more trouble!!
Ibeh Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 9:27 PM
I'm glad this one tickled your funny bone, Linda!:-)
Levasseur Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Spot on.
Ibeh Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Rob:-) Merry Christmas!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 2:54 PM
Great footle :) God B L E S S You and Merry Christmas :)
Ibeh Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Thank you very much, Regina:-) Merry Christmas!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 6:58 AM
Well done footle!
Ibeh Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Kim:-) Merry Christmas!
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