In the Sky

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While waiting for an eclipse, a community gives individual descriptions of what they think

They observe in the sky. For some the eclipse is known as an BAD OMEN. A LARK is a

Bird.

Never have I ever seen such a sky. "Lo' there a lotus spy" an angelic lark did cry. High up in the ever present sky. Other keener senses arise, the eclipse. There is Destiny foretold simply declared As it unfolds.

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Lewis Nyaga

Date: 5/28/2016 3:17:00 AM

Good one.. make me recall a solar eclipse i witnessed.. the world went dark in the early afternoon..

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 6/4/2016 2:55:00 AM

Thanx for taking the time to appreciate my poem.