Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

In the Sketch of a Moment

i long to falter
into the depths
of your soul

feel the contour 
of your lips
falling charily
against mine

as i quiver
beneath your
whispers

the tremble
of your stroke
against a bare canvas
as you paint me
pretty

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Brenda Chiri October 1, 2019 at 12:48 PM Wowers lol love it;) Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 6:28 PM thanks...just a little scribble from my muse...

Chris Green October 1, 2019 at 6:54 AM Your poem is a masterpiece of soft brushstrokes infused with love and desire. Absolutely beautiful my friend. I love everything about this. Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:17 AM Thank you my friend...your comment made me smile this morning :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux October 1, 2019 at 6:43 AM I think you were pretty before he started painting. ;0) Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:18 AM Thanks Rick...what a sweet thing to say :)

Vijay Pandit October 1, 2019 at 6:38 AM How romantic is this! A lovely poem--great ending line..excellent, as always, Sandy. Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:18 AM thank you so much Vijay :) hugs

Tom Cunningham October 1, 2019 at 4:01 AM You have a talent for this form of verse Sandra, well written. Tom Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:19 AM Thank you Tom...free verse comes easy for me, i struggle in rhyme and meter forms... hugs :)

Mahtab Bangalee October 1, 2019 at 3:35 AM thyself lives in the veins of moment! Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:20 AM Thank you :)

Regina Mcintosh September 30, 2019 at 10:32 PM Beautiful. God bless you Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thank you so much Regina :) hugs

Hello There September 30, 2019 at 10:24 PM A savory piece, Sandra... yum ;) Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thank you HT :) hugs

Line Gauthier September 30, 2019 at 9:59 PM Lovely, Sandra. Sandra Adams October 1, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thank you Line :) hugs