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In the Sketch of a Moment

i long to falter into the depths of your soul feel the contour of your lips falling charily against mine as i quiver beneath your whispers the tremble of your stroke against a bare canvas as you paint me pretty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/1/2019 12:48:00 PM
Wowers lol love it;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 6:28:00 PM
thanks...just a little scribble from my muse...
Date: 10/1/2019 6:54:00 AM
Your poem is a masterpiece of soft brushstrokes infused with love and desire. Absolutely beautiful my friend. I love everything about this.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thank you my friend...your comment made me smile this morning :) hugs
Date: 10/1/2019 6:43:00 AM
I think you were pretty before he started painting. ;0)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Rick...what a sweet thing to say :)
Date: 10/1/2019 6:38:00 AM
How romantic is this! A lovely poem--great ending line..excellent, as always, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:18:00 AM
thank you so much Vijay :) hugs
Date: 10/1/2019 4:01:00 AM
You have a talent for this form of verse Sandra, well written. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Tom...free verse comes easy for me, i struggle in rhyme and meter forms... hugs :)
Date: 10/1/2019 3:35:00 AM
thyself lives in the veins of moment!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:20:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/30/2019 10:32:00 PM
Beautiful. God bless you
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina :) hugs
Date: 9/30/2019 10:24:00 PM
A savory piece, Sandra... yum ;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you HT :) hugs
Date: 9/30/2019 9:59:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Line :) hugs

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