In the Shower

Naked in the shower,
Water flowing over me
As hot as I can bear;
Scalding my skin,
Masking my tears,
Drowning my cries,
Hardening my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 12, 2016 at 3:33 AM
your poem is powerful yet short. i wrote a longer poem on the same subject. So difficult, right?
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November 1, 2016 at 7:15 AM
Such a sad and lonely feeling piece but well written too. It says a lot in just a few words. Nicely done.
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November 1, 2016 at 6:37 AM
Sad and beautiful
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