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In The Shadow of Sunlight

Written: August 05, 2024 For Edward Ibeh Contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Flourishing strands of rose-colored mist, Blend in with the gentle rays of dawn gist. Silver vapors form around the equine nose, Glistening bark recalls twilight pine as it froze. As an argentite with a sapphire-like luster, Inferno rippled amid a tranquil woodland tusker. Below the canopy that casts a gloomy shadow, Icy roads dare to swirl and twirl celestial hallow. Skies atop mountains capped with snow, Depicting strong sides and silky locks aglow. The luminous caramel of dawn after dusk, Luscious hooves gracefully waltz and husk. On the clay that is entirely icy and faultless, Bright-dappled alabaster begins dauntless. A specter of light and dark, elusive and evasive, Silent in the thrill of speed, coiled, suasive. Furiously glints through a gap in the hedge, Pebbles hit the soil, scatter, and wedge. The rain fell from above in a stony sleet, The horse grinds to a stop gracefully fleet. Conducting an ecological survey, Perched on her glorious, sun-kissed display.

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Date: 8/23/2024 11:51:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I  enjoyed reading your very creative Rhyme write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 8/20/2024 10:24:00 AM
Stunning, captivating poem with great imagery and flow, Lasaad. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
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Date: 8/19/2024 8:29:00 AM
Hearty congratulations master Sotto On your top placement with a magnificent poem with mastery rhymes, diction and imagery as usual. Wish you a pleasant day .
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Date: 8/19/2024 6:48:00 AM
I sat in a trance for several minutes after reading this...rereading... and am amazed at how your words transported me to this beautiful place of majestic scenes and horses in a dream like world. Well deserved win! Xo
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Date: 8/15/2024 9:59:00 AM
Your words dance so effortlessly with wonderous imagery and rhyme, and the result is dazzling!
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Date: 8/10/2024 3:10:00 PM
I think some horses truly need to run free. I loved this line "Glistening bark recalls twilight pine as it froze" and "On the clay that is entirely icy and faultless" beautiful.
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Date: 8/8/2024 12:13:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative Rhyme write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.....................
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Date: 8/6/2024 3:26:00 PM
Aloha! Sotto, I just finished readingthis poem. I enjoyed reading about the horse. Aloha! Darlene/
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Date: 8/6/2024 10:50:00 AM
Nice poem with sun-kissed iamges.
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Date: 8/6/2024 8:32:00 AM
Dear Sotto, I love horses so you captured me from the start. If I am reading this correctly it seems to be an ecological survey showing the horse's harmonious existence within the environment. -Well Inked! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/5/2024 8:33:00 PM
I enjoy this lively, color filled poem. A graceful horse brings stunning animation. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 8/5/2024 5:34:00 PM
Wonderful poetry Sotto, your words create a beautiful scene in the reader’s mind of ‘a sun-kissed display’… Beryl
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Date: 8/5/2024 2:09:00 PM
I like your descriptive, radiant display of sun- kissed images...well done , sotto!
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