Premiere Contest WinnerIn the Shadow of Her Wings

Angels live in heaven, they say Maybe in astral beauty they glow As sparkling stars of the milky way They often descend on earth I know. How do I know, you may ask me I’ve seen in the heart of my mother The glow as the shine of the star can be Like a flower she nurtured me lest I wither. In troubled times the family was adrift She toiled hard to find for us a safe harbor To my storm-ravaged life she gave a timely gift The security of a nest to build the uncertain future. She kept me in the shadow of her wings Flame of my candle winds couldn’t blow away In her shadow I live with her love memory brings For it’s her hands that sculpted me what I’m today. She has left for her abode a long time ago When in dark night I see the north star glisten Like a lone guide to my destination, I then know She is with the angels residing far away in heaven.
Written : August 10, 2018 February 1, 2020 Contest : Strand Choice 12, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Mitra Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:11 PM
such a great way to acknowledge mother...although not new theme...yet it touched.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 2:21 AM
Thank you for your visit.
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Such a beautiful tribute to your 'angel' Mom, Subimal! I can identify with your love and thankfulness of having had a wonderful mother. Well done, and congratulations on your First Place Trophy win. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 2:20 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your comments. The poem came from my heart for my mother.
Sands Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:22 PM
A special poem Subimal. Congratulations for your win :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Thank you. Heidi.
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Lovely write and sentiment, congratulations Subimal...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Gauthier Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:05 AM
A lovely poem, Subimal. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Thank you, Line.
Gentry Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 4:12 AM
Beautiful poem and display! Congratulations on your #1 win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 11:52 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 3:54 AM
Many congratulations
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Thank you. Purbasha.
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:54 AM
Lovely poem, Subimal, and a worthy tribute. Congrats on a fine first place. regards, Viv
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Viv.
Waters Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:39 AM
A lovely tribute. Congratulations on first place.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Virginia.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Dear Subimal, this piece was just so beautiful, so in depth, so pure. Thank you for writing it. Congratulations!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Thank you for your visit and for the nice comments.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 12:28 PM
This is so lovely Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Trophy First Placement! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Thank you very much, Connie.
Dutta Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 12:24 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top on this wonderful beautiful poem. Regards.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Thank you very much.
Canerdy Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 12:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Subimal! Congrats on your top win! Janice
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Pinet Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations Subimal! Your amazing poem "IN THE SHADOW OF HER WINGS", has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge, very well done my friend, Emile.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Thank you so much, Emile for the placement.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 5:30 PM
This is beautiful writing, Subimal, and a sublime message.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:12 AM
Thank you, Andra for your encouraging comments.
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August 14, 2018 at 1:12 AM
Thank you, Andra for your encouraging comments.
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