In the Savannah

We
had
to make
a dash from-
rhinos in a crash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Chamma Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 4:34 PM
ha! Great write and what seems like a great experience...Thank you for sharing :) TYOne, Farah
Winter Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 11:41 AM
Well that must be an unforgettable experience. Yikes. Scary. Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 10:44 AM
I would have love to see the herd of them running along. I can close my eyes and see this clearly and the mad dash that ensued. Great short, effective write.
Reynolds Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 5:24 AM
Yes, one must watch for those rhino's - they'll swallow you whole! Yikes, a chilling poem. Love Kristin
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