Ravindra K Kapoor Poet Free verse

In the Rising Clouds

In the rising clouds 

In the rising clouds of mind,
Your image often gets formed
But by the time
The eyes can take the impression  
It hides some where and get lost

The thirsty mind keep searching
That image in every eyelid and heart
In the dark lowering clouds 
Of rainy season
Even amid the branches of trees
In autumn

Ravindra 

Kanpur India   05th Feb 2010
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Originally written many years back in Hindi language
Translated on 4th Feb 2010 
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April 6, 2010 at 1:18 PM Much for the reader to think about. Insightful poem. Glad you decided to translate it for us to enjoy. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 9, 2010 at 9:24 PM Nice write, interesting thoughts. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today. Caroline.

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2010 at 6:21 AM Great write and very romantic in its own way. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Doris Culverhouse February 5, 2010 at 4:27 PM enjoyed reading toay

Carolyn Devonshire February 5, 2010 at 8:25 AM It's interesting the way the images we see in clouds keep changing. That is the nature of clouds and also the nature of the human mind. Very profound writing, Ravindra. I wrote a poem about changing cloud formations "Behind the Clouds" that has an uplifting message. This is great writing! Love, Carolyn