In the Rain

I still can feel you holding my 
hand.
I still can feel the kisses that 
land, 
On my lips when I was your 
man.
I will do anything for an other 
chance.
But we both know where my 
odds stand.
I hate standing in this rain.
But it's cold and it helps to not 
feel the pain.
I stare at the mirror and I don't 
know who to blame?
I see you in me, dang.
It's the smallest thangs,
That I miss and makes me go 
insane-Mario Perez
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 21, 2012 at 7:49 PM
sad romance.....hope you are poetically inspired here at the soup!!
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