Jajosh Ongado Poet Free verse

In the Park

I was a child of merry swings

Swings that rolled to touch the light, blue

Blue the park winging despite time,

Time for my boy to feel my child.



For nette onclaud--- Four Lines Only
Jajosh Ongado---June 8, 2015
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Joe Maverick June 14, 2015 at 3:12 PM Congratulations on the winning piece Jajosh..'

Skat A June 12, 2015 at 7:45 PM Jajosh, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT

Kim Merryman June 12, 2015 at 6:05 PM Well done, Jajosh! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison June 12, 2015 at 3:13 PM i chose this visual too beautifully penned congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Manny Paras June 10, 2015 at 2:12 PM Allowing your boy to experience parts of your own childhood is fantastic. Well scribed, J!