Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Blank verse

- In the Night You Came -

Red roses on a white painted wall
           Bushes decorative a beauty of eye
           They are not forgotten ... recalls smell

           Night heaven makes the mystery blue
           Snowflakes dancing pleasure is beautiful in deep silence
           Dead roses are frozen

           A white veil hanging from the trees
           a landscape almost like a fairy tale
           Thoughts seeking the adventure mighty castle

           Snowflakes and wind whizzing
           Winter's cold frozen ballet
           Beautiful graceful and soft pirouettes





24.11.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

(1st place in the contest)

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Kelly Deschler February 18, 2014 at 11:38 PM This poem is very beautiful and quite breathtaking. There seems to be a little bit of sadness in these words, as well. I really enjoyed this amazing poem, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2014 at 2:04 AM - Thanks for visiting and greeting, Kelly - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun February 14, 2014 at 2:47 AM This is a beautiful and very impressive write from you my very dear friend of mine, Anne Lise! I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing!.And, my hearty congratulations on your great win! Cheers and big hugs! I'm stopping by also to greet u & your loved ones a very Happy Valentines Day! Wish u all the best! Thank u so much for everything esp. your kindness, support, love, friendship & everything! More blessings to u esp. this Hearts Day! love and misses u, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2014 at 2:52 AM - A big heart is sent back to you my friend Leonora! - Thanks for visiting and greeting, - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gautami Phookan February 13, 2014 at 8:14 AM Ah, I love this one! It's such a pleasing one.. Congrats Annelise on a beautiful poem and win! hugs.. Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2014 at 8:29 AM - Thanks for visiting and greeting, Gautami - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode February 13, 2014 at 3:34 AM Congrats Anne on win with this leading work. Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2014 at 3:37 AM - Thanks for visiting and greeting, Kayod5 - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton February 12, 2014 at 3:48 PM simply lovely Anne Lise congrats on win hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2014 at 3:50 PM - Thanks for visiting and greeting, Shadow - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta February 12, 2014 at 9:07 AM Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win, anne

Joseph May February 12, 2014 at 9:07 AM Congrats on a fine win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2014 at 11:51 AM - Thanks for visiting and greeting, Joseph - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2014 at 11:50 AM - Thanks for visiting and greeting, Dr. Ram - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Maverick February 12, 2014 at 7:35 AM W O W Anne-Lise, sounds like some fairy tale Knight... arrived on that night L O L)) best wishes on the winning..' Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2014 at 7:43 AM - Thanks for visiting and greeting, Joe - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Luna Amjua December 22, 2013 at 9:07 AM Hello thank you for your comment! I love this one it makes me think of the first day its snows when everything is quite. Anne-Lise Andresen December 22, 2013 at 9:09 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, sweet new friend Yessica. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paddi March December 17, 2013 at 2:36 PM You really capture the feel of snow, a delight for me is that deep,deep silence that comes with gently falling snow. It transports you to another world. It is a lovely poem. I do not know any place (or how) i can write to you to thank you for the comments that you have made on some of my poems. Your latest comment on "Remnants" pleased me a lot. I had intended it for a contest on "Hands" but I couldn't stop writing so now its too long. Thank you Anne lise for your lovely comments Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2013 at 2:44 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, sweet new friend Paddi. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lekau Mamabolo November 27, 2013 at 5:53 AM Great imagination, keep up the good work, Lekau Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2013 at 6:04 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Lekau. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 27, 2013 at 3:09 AM still dreamy from this piece, anne... is it cold there now?.. happy day and huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2013 at 3:17 AM ..... the snow came .... then it rain away.... :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2013 at 2:15 AM I love all these images of white. Came by to say happy thanksgiving though you probably don't have that holiday. Luv ya, Andrea Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2013 at 2:48 AM - No Thanksgiving in Norway ! - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jay Loveless November 26, 2013 at 11:16 PM A lovely image :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2013 at 2:47 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Jay. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan November 26, 2013 at 7:58 PM very nice Anne Lise ;} Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2013 at 2:47 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton November 26, 2013 at 6:40 PM a lovely portrait painted Anne Lise so well captured is winter kudos Shadow x smile hug Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2013 at 2:46 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler November 26, 2013 at 4:25 PM A breathtaking winter scene that you have described here, Anne-Lise! I really loved it! Wonderful work!...Thank you so much for the great comments. I really do appreciate it! Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2013 at 2:46 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin November 26, 2013 at 2:11 PM Glad to be inside reading this lovely winter's view. Love, daver Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2013 at 2:13 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Daver. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll November 26, 2013 at 11:50 AM Hi Anne, A most lovely winter delight! Ken Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2013 at 12:10 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak November 26, 2013 at 8:35 AM Absolutely beautiful images of winter. Love the roses contrasted with the snow. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2013 at 10:19 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid November 26, 2013 at 7:06 AM a very beautifully drawn piece dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2013 at 7:23 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit,Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Fatima Nusairat November 25, 2013 at 6:49 PM Snowflakes and wind whizzing Winter's cold frozen ballet Beautiful graceful and soft pirouettes So beautiful my dear Anne..I love it <3 Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2013 at 3:46 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Fatima. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones November 25, 2013 at 6:37 PM These winter scenes are like fairy tales..such a pretty poem....thank you for all your inspiring comments Anne Lise...you are so kind Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2013 at 3:46 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne November 25, 2013 at 3:07 PM beautiful, my friend Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2013 at 3:09 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick November 25, 2013 at 12:16 PM Very descriptive of a winter scene..I enjoye reeading this one today..I noticed that you had commented..Gratitude flows from my pen to your page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2013 at 12:28 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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