In the Muck

When indecision drops on by,
No matter how I want to try
To move ahead, I find that I
Am absolutely stuck.

Though getting out is my desire,
Circumstances will conspire,
Trapping me within the mire,
To wallow in the muck.

Plans and changes don’t get made;
Forward motion is delayed,
All because I’m too afraid
And lack the needed pluck.

Better, then, to just remain
With things in place and thus refrain
From choices that will make it plain
Why critics choose to cluck.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Parker Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 2:07 PM
Evocative, Miss Irene. Hold fast and step out! :o)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 2:43 AM
I have known you for years. I doubt this line "And lack the needed pluck."
Leffanta Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Enjoyed, but you can always choose between "this" and "that", so go for it!
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 9:04 PM
Perfect follow-up to JFK's 'Profiles in Courage.' lol. C'mon, Ilene. Go, girl!!
Hankins Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 7:22 PM
Beautifully written, Ilene, and the work you put into it clearly shows. These are not nearly so easy to write as some would think. I know better, because I've tried.
Flood Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Sounds like one step forward, two steps back, only without the step forward. Been there many times, Ilene. Well described. Terry
Slaughter Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 1:12 PM
I guess we all go through our own personal "muck" at some point in our lives. I know I certainly did. I really like this one, Ilene.
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