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In the Morning

Forest light, June murmurs, sailing wren.. -for Gigno's "Ellip" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/7/2013 2:00:00 PM

Nice season approach. ..good haiku. ..pd

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/27/2013 11:14:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and will be a haiku fav for me.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/15/2013 12:12:00 AM

You squeezed a lot of imagery out of only nine syllables.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/12/2013 9:47:00 PM

ahh this is so nicely done :) enjoyed this piece so much <3 :) all the best dear poet Jeremy :) Sk

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2013 6:08:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review of my work is appreciated..Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/5/2013 10:50:00 PM

Nice use of imaegry, love the middle line.

Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/6/2013 8:27:00 PM

Thank you

... Gigno

Date: 3/4/2013 12:56:00 PM

!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2013 7:33:00 AM

Jeremy, lovely haiku! - Thank you! - Luck in contest. - oxox / / Anne - Lise :)

Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/5/2013 6:06:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :)