In the Morning

Forest light,
June murmurs,
sailing wren.. 



-for Gigno's "Ellip" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 2:00 PM
Nice season approach. ..good haiku. ..pd
Delaney Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 11:14 PM
Beautiful imagery and will be a haiku fav for me.
Pettit Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 12:12 AM
You squeezed a lot of imagery out of only nine syllables.
Komala Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 9:47 PM
ahh this is so nicely done :) enjoyed this piece so much <3 :) all the best dear poet Jeremy :) Sk
Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review of my work is appreciated..Sara
Moreno Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Nice use of imaegry, love the middle line.
Martin Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 8:27 PM
Thank you
Gigno Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 12:56 PM
!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 7:33 AM
Jeremy, lovely haiku! - Thank you! - Luck in contest. - oxox / / Anne - Lise :)
Martin Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
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