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In the morning

Forest light, June murmurs, sailing wren.. -for Gigno's "Ellip" contest

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Date: 4/7/2013 2:00:00 PM
Nice season approach. ..good haiku. ..pd
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Date: 3/27/2013 11:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and will be a haiku fav for me.
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Date: 3/15/2013 12:12:00 AM
You squeezed a lot of imagery out of only nine syllables.
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Date: 3/12/2013 9:47:00 PM
ahh this is so nicely done :) enjoyed this piece so much <3 :) all the best dear poet Jeremy :) Sk
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Date: 3/12/2013 6:08:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review of my work is appreciated..Sara
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Date: 3/5/2013 10:50:00 PM
Nice use of imaegry, love the middle line.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/6/2013 8:27:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 3/4/2013 12:56:00 PM
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Date: 3/3/2013 7:33:00 AM
Jeremy, lovely haiku! - Thank you! - Luck in contest. - oxox / / Anne - Lise :)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/5/2013 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)