In the Moment

In the moment
'tis but a second
A fleeting glimpse
an eyelid's blink
In a jiffy
Nothing flash
The twinkling of an eye
What do you think?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 9:29 AM
That's what it is-:-) congratulations..
A  Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 6:04 PM
Michael, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 1:22 PM
You portrayed this very well - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Michael, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
Birchmore Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Thank you. I will.
Sietesantos Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 5:12 PM
As fleeting as moments are, you managed to capture one skillfully and brilliantly in this piece! Bravo! Pandita
Birchmore Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Thank you Pandita
Parker Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:45 AM
I think the moment has passed as your poem did express...captures the moment well..
Birchmore Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Thank you.
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