In the Moment

I am in the cliff of death that moment.
The very first life I'm about to give birth.
You were on my side and held my hands so tight.
Assuring that tomorrow I'll see the precious one of my life.


I saw in your beautiful face that you feel all my pain.
Then teardrops suddenly fall in your eyes,
When you hear a little voice cried out loud.
The fruit of thy womb of your precious one.

You were with me from the day that I born,
Then helped me become a successful person.
You're also there when I fell and destroyed.
You never left when I needed you most.

I want to dedicate this little piece.
To my only mother here on Earth.
In the moment I first saw my angel.
You made me stronger until today.


Written on: December 28 ,2014
Written by : Aiyah De Torres
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 9:00 AM
This is wonderful.....congratulations
Oule Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Mothers need such beautiful poems, i loved the pictures in them poem Congs
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February 19, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Aiyah, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
Roper Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings eve
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 9:57 AM
This was so moving - many congrats AiyaH:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Hello Once again Aiyah, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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February 21, 2015 at 5:32 PM
it's always a pleasure to join in your contest ,dear Linda :) and I thank you for considering my poem to be one your winners... more luck to your upcoming contests... ^_^
A   Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 10:10 AM
I am very moved by your poem, Aiyah. My mother made me who I am from, day one until now. A wonderful and moving dedication. It's been a long while since I've read or stopped by. Nice seeing you.. Linda
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December 31, 2014 at 1:17 PM
Mothers are there when they are most needed. Sometimes we tend to forget that, but they never forget us! Childbirth is such a precious event, and you caught that moment with such warm feelings! May I wish you all the best for the new year Aiyah...especially happiness, good health and love!:) /x/ paul
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December 29, 2014 at 10:11 AM
How beautiful AiyaH my friend...have a happy and blessed new year...hugs Tim
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December 29, 2014 at 2:27 AM
This is a very precious poem and dedication to your great mom my very dear friend Aiyah. Just like your poem, mothers are so precious , 'coz they are always there from our birth up to the time when we also be mothers. I love your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your Christmas greetings and warm wishes! I lovingly Wish you and your loved ones all the best as well! God bless you & your family! Miss you a lot too! love lots and big hugs. I'll b back soon ok. Leonora
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December 28, 2014 at 5:30 AM
- So beautifully written to your mother, dear Aiyah - I wish you luck in the contest and a happy new year 2015 !!! - All the best to you my friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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