In the Mix With Immortality

Love lingers in my life, my alluring air;
A golden glow and glamour, gift from a holy ghost,
like a fine flower so free and fair
cruising with creative colours in a cool coast,
God's lasting law, traded to us...my tender toast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Benson Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:18 PM
In the mix with immortality, made interesting and appealing.
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:07 AM
Congratulations Adeleke on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 5:51 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Adeleke. Congratulations on your worthy poem's sixth place. Agape, Moses
Horne Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Many congrats, Adelke : )
Phookan Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 4:07 AM
Super Congrats Adeleke on your big win with this excellent entry..Love, Gautami
Mehta Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 3:50 AM
Many congrats Adeleke for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Super creative Adeleke.Warmest congrats for this super win dear.
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 6:08 PM
This is really nice, Adeleke. I am happy to see one of your poems. It has been a while! Congratulations.
George   Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 6:07 PM
This is really top-notch, dear Adeleke. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Congrats Adeleke on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest with these eloquent words of entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations on the sixth placewin in my contest, Adeleke,
George   Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 2:23 AM
Sure to be at the top of the winner's circle, Adeleke, Lainie
Brumley Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 11:52 AM
The bread of life seasoned by the Holy Ghost as living toast! A beautiful poem for a beautiful spirit. Check out my poem 'The Unbound' I think you'll like it.
Onclaud Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 10:57 AM
such depth coming from your soul so natural and honest... i relish this beautiful piece, adelke... a winner for me! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 10:33 PM
Sweet one, Adeleke. How have you been lately? Nice to stumble on you here tonight!
Sadberry Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Smile, *^_^* 'Traded to us'=such an intriguing expression leaving one as to ponder its possible meaning, my dear. = Yet, I find such a lovely image amid this pleasantly created and colourful canvas brushed in pretty, afore my eyes and, deep inside. == And I too shall toast, the beauty of the Holy Ghost; along with the glamour, the flowers and the golden glow, of this lovely canvas. === love, jasper
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry Adeleke. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Thanks for the entry, Adeleke
Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 8:59 AM
i feel the blessed-ness of your heart here, aldelke.. so beautiful.. winning's best to you! dance!..:) huggs, nette
Susan Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Very nice. Glowing and alluring? Lucky you! Cheers!
Bloomsfield Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Cheers!very beautiful
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