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In the Mix With Immortality

Love lingers in my life, my alluring air; A golden glow and glamour, gift from a holy ghost, like a fine flower so free and fair cruising with creative colours in a cool coast, God's lasting law, traded to us...my tender toast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/15/2011 6:18:00 PM
In the mix with immortality, made interesting and appealing.
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Date: 4/19/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations Adeleke on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:51:00 PM
Great to see you in the top ten Adeleke. Congratulations on your worthy poem's sixth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:12:00 PM
Many congrats, Adelke : )
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:07:00 AM
Super Congrats Adeleke on your big win with this excellent entry..Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:50:00 AM
Many congrats Adeleke for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/15/2011 8:55:00 PM
Super creative Adeleke.Warmest congrats for this super win dear.
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:08:00 PM
This is really nice, Adeleke. I am happy to see one of your poems. It has been a while! Congratulations.
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:07:00 PM
This is really top-notch, dear Adeleke. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:15:00 PM
Congrats Adeleke on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest with these eloquent words of entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/15/2011 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/15/2011 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the sixth placewin in my contest, Adeleke,
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:23:00 AM
Sure to be at the top of the winner's circle, Adeleke, Lainie
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Date: 4/7/2011 11:52:00 AM
The bread of life seasoned by the Holy Ghost as living toast! A beautiful poem for a beautiful spirit. Check out my poem 'The Unbound' I think you'll like it.
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Date: 4/6/2011 10:57:00 AM
such depth coming from your soul so natural and honest... i relish this beautiful piece, adelke... a winner for me! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/5/2011 10:33:00 PM
Sweet one, Adeleke. How have you been lately? Nice to stumble on you here tonight!
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Date: 4/5/2011 10:27:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* 'Traded to us'=such an intriguing expression leaving one as to ponder its possible meaning, my dear. = Yet, I find such a lovely image amid this pleasantly created and colourful canvas brushed in pretty, afore my eyes and, deep inside. == And I too shall toast, the beauty of the Holy Ghost; along with the glamour, the flowers and the golden glow, of this lovely canvas. === love, jasper
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Date: 4/5/2011 10:11:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry Adeleke. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:14:00 AM
Thanks for the entry, Adeleke
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Date: 4/5/2011 8:59:00 AM
i feel the blessed-ness of your heart here, aldelke.. so beautiful.. winning's best to you! dance!..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/5/2011 8:22:00 AM
Very nice. Glowing and alluring? Lucky you! Cheers!
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Date: 4/5/2011 7:54:00 AM
Cheers!very beautiful
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