In the Mirror's Eyes

Alas, death sets in
The bitter cold at night
The chills that haunt my soul
Creeping in like a virus
It makes no sound
But in your heart
It always will abound

This pain gives offset emotions
In the mirror I hate what I see
I see, me

A person with no future
No hope
No dreams
No aspirations
Just one lost soul

But what I don't know
Is that there is someone who cares
Even if I ignore it
I make myself oblivious to the love around
All I hear is the repeating sound

From lost lovers saying no
To old friends that let me go

I look in this mirror and see
Someone who wants to be free
Escape the bitter pain
But if take my life now it will all be in vain

I am unaware
Of the little things around
The friends that still care
The family I still have
I take it all for granted
And I do not see
How much these people
Really love me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Marie Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Whoa...it's dark, and i like it.
Hilliker Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 11:27 AM
Nicely written. Keep on keeping on!
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 11:27 AM
Sad topic. Keep writing. Sara
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