In the Midst of My Dreams

In the midst of my dreams where happily ever afters and fairy tales come true the scarlet rose moon dips as she dances along side me under a million flickering strobes illuminating our milky way serenade I call out her name and the brightest star shines I watch her gleam I watch her glow basking in all that's good and I know that beauty The same beauty I see in her face as I hear those fragrant whispers showering down on me
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Lindley Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Romance written at its best. - "I call out her name and the brightest star shines I watch her gleam I watch her glow basking in all that's good and I know" Sweet, and so smoothly romantic.. A7
Eastman Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Sigh... Can't read your work without a sigh of appreciation... Lovely... as always...
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 12:17 AM
very beautiful, Tim!
Dunn Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 9:52 PM
Dear Tim What a romantic work, very expressive and passionate, great job, cheri
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Your romantic heart my friend, Tim, makes the Milky way blush! Excellent writing!
Chircop Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Extremely Romantic... Very warm and beautiful , a fave.
Smith Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Your verses say so much : )
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 4:43 PM
Im so happy it inspired such a beauty...cuz mine is a simple verse. : )
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Im humbled : )
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Charmu. I was inspired to write an echo to your beautiful verse.
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