In the Middle of the Universe, I Stand

1

In the middle of the universe, I stand-
A mere earthling by stomping on sand 
raise hands to the gods forever at odds
How to call square at the end.

2
I am in  the center of all
Awe-struck wide eyes at the ball
I am six feet tall
Can I say no to death call?

3
In the middle of the universe I stand
I exist, come and exit and life is never bland
I am an old quark for Mr. Marks
and receive my bills firsthand.
4
I am in the center of all
In my eyes deepest passions roll,
In the fringes of Milky way I stroll,
"I know my voices are dying with the dying fall"*





cf.*The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
Lines 49-54 (T.S.Eliot)

In the middle of the universe, I stand. - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	Verlena S. Walker
Poet: Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date of Composition: 4th February,2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/15/2015 11:09:00 AM
RAJAT, Congratulations on your awesome win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:06:00 AM
Back to congratulate you... nad!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Nad, Love
Date: 2/6/2015 10:08:00 PM
Hey, Mr. Fifth place. I share a place with you in this contest. So you are the one I am congratulating. Way to go in the contest!!!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 3:35:00 AM
Hey Lady Andrea so sweet.God bless.
Date: 2/6/2015 7:18:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/5/2015 10:45:00 AM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination as your magic pen danced and brought forth such profound thoughts. Emile.
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Date: 2/4/2015 10:50:00 PM
We are a part of the universe and we need to be in harmony wit hit. Thanks for your visit too on my page!
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Date: 2/4/2015 10:34:00 AM
Love this Rajat. I am amazed each day I read a poem or two from you...You have such wide range of verbal virtuosity...A 7! Best regards and smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim
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Date: 2/4/2015 9:34:00 AM
Excellent write Rajat - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/4/2015 9:12:00 AM
Prufrock by Eliot is one of my favs.. a very good pen friend.. best wishes, nad!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/4/2015 9:20:00 AM
Love Nad, God bless
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