In the Middle of the Night

Pondering A wonderful process Wondering in the middle of the night. Discovering! Deeply viewing. Thinking microscopically. Imagining intricately. Analyzing philosophically. Outside, stars twinkle. The moon glows bright. Bird chirps remain mute. Lonely crickets seranade darkness. The morning waits. Inside, children sleep. Quietness invites insight. Creativity abounds. Amid all of this thinking, God inspires. Ó November 16, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2011 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/26/2011 1:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/24/2011 10:13:00 AM

Love free verse. You really do it justice here. Enjoyed. Congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2011 11:39:00 PM

DANE, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/24/2011 1:14:00 AM

Thank you. Big Smiles...and Happy Thanksgiving to you, also. With love, Dane Ann

John Castro

Date: 11/16/2011 11:25:00 AM

I USUALLY JUST COMMENT ON RYHMES BUT THIS IS BEAUTIFUL 7UP

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 11:20:00 AM

I feel honored, then. Big Smiles.

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/16/2011 7:14:00 AM

Enjoyed your poem, Dane. Kim

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 11:20:00 AM

Thank you so very much for reading my poetry and taking time to leave your comment. I appreciate you more than you might imagine. I have really enjoyed these few days that I have had the opportunity to write and read some poetry here on the soup. It’s great to be able to do so and hopefully, it will continue. But…life is about to be hectic once again…soon. I send my love. Sincerely, Dane Ann

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2011 3:18:00 AM

Dear Dane,,, this happens to be one of natures dark side... very good with the imagination.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 11:21:00 AM

And a beautiful darkness this one is! Big Smiles.