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In the Meadow

English rhyme scheme in tetrameter The sun and morning haze diffused a bright soft blanket o'er the meadow, to float and cloak what was misused, the dead and dying in the shadows. This meadow in God's placid gaze where yesterday there laid two lovers before the devil set ablaze what this mourning blanket covers. We are the children of all time, we are the parents of tomorrow; the bells in distant steeples chime and wring with tears and drip with sorrow. Yet still with hatred in our hearts - within, a future battle starts.

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Date: 11/18/2017 4:27:00 PM
your poem makes us think, we are sane, we are insane, we are simple, we are complex, we love, we hate, we are human, we are not
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Craig Cornish
Date: 11/18/2017 10:32:00 PM
Frederic................what can I say when someone captures all of my essence of thought, except thank you.
Date: 11/18/2017 12:17:00 PM
WOW....Craig, that last couplet is a dagger to the heart of peace and love. A subtle metaphor lingers in each line. Thank you for this "speed bump" of thoughtful poeticinvite.
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