In the Light of the Window

she lingers,
     forever embedded in my memory,
          the most beautiful girl I’ve yet to behold.
the epitome of all things lovely:
     sunlight filters through the window,
          speckling her freckled face with golden sun,
in her flaming hair, 
     shimmering sunbeams,
          ethereal as that of an angel.
perfect and soft as a gently rolling stream,
     her voice caresses the air,
          with melodies comparable to nothing on earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/29/2015 10:47:00 PM
So beautiful. I could see this girl from your poem. Such amazing imagery and powerful use of words
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:47:00 PM
Shaina, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Shaina Templin
Date: 4/28/2015 3:43:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 4/16/2015 6:23:00 PM
I think you kicked this form into submission because that was amazing! You did an amazing job painting an image in my mind and leaving nothing unsaid. I can't wait to read more!!! <3 Tash
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Date: 4/15/2015 6:22:00 PM
SHAINA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/14/2015 6:04:00 PM
Shaina, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/14/2015 8:02:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Shaina ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Shaina Templin
Date: 4/14/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 4/13/2015 9:52:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, you can feel the light come right off the page and into the room.
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Shaina Templin
Date: 4/14/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thanks, I was toying around with light imagery; I'm happy to hear it was successful~
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