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In the Land of Make Believe

Once upon a time There was a place that was not too hot And not too cold Where the sun took turns with the rain The hills and the sky were An orchestra which played together And the wind conducted their Symphony. Both the clouds and flowers smiled The world was one city One city. Once upon a time There was a land of make believe In my mind…. …..when life was just a dream.

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Date: 1/4/2019 7:19:00 AM
That ending is excellent my friend--so is your poem and the theme.
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 1/7/2019 1:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay!

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