In the Hush

At shore just shy of ocean floor
Shy by foolish miles and miles more
Splashing in through shallow withouts 
Hush hush all these flourishing doubts

Cautious soul breathes rush of air
Push down the rush to hold it there
Shining spirit in primal shouts
Hush hush all these flourishing doubts

Shortcomings bashed and admonished
In waves washing them astonished
No sharing shapes of shaken bouts
Hush hush all my flourishing doubts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 2, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Beautiful feeling of the calming waves of the sea, I like the northern beaches the most~
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