In the Hush

In the Hush

"It is finished!"  over, complete
Echoing in the twilight hush
On Saturday's holy ground
Breathing through candles on the Sabbath table
Slowly vibrating to a fevered breath
Strong enough to shatter stone
And melt iron tipped spears to plowshares;
In sacred stillness
Centuries of exile emerge from catacombs of somnolence
In quiet breaths of quietude's understanding
And gather ragged edges of unsettled grieving,
To sit resolved with shredded edges,
Before the quivering daybreak can exhale
Before the Promise of the Ages readies to inhale
Sweet breath
Mystery of the miraculous dangles over
Smiles of silent satisfaction
Victory over the absurd re-enters
Awakening the soft slumber
Of Heaven's returning scarred Prince
In a stone womb sanctuary;
Death whimpers
Forgiveness reunites shallow breathing
In the wheeze of asthmatic gasps
And readies to explode on gales of the first rays
Of rising dawn
Piercing sorrow with breezes of wonder!

Alleluia!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 4:00 PM
wow, this is simply wonderful, Sam
Kauffman Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 10:38 AM
I'm so glad you like it Andrea. That lifts my heart and puts a :) on this face! I had started it last Friday and the concluding stanzas woke me up on Saturday morning! It is one of those poems that seems to have an inner life of its own. Blessings dear friend.
Mitra Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Nicely done Sam....Congrats on your win :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Thank you Carol. Sending you Easter blessings :)"
Devonshire Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Truly a masterful description of the first Easter Sunday, Sam. The "scarred Prince" recalls the nails used to put Christ on the cross. I love this! A new fave for me, Sam. Absolutely beautiful and a poem that touches the reader on many levels. Hope you enjoyed your Easter. Hugs, Carolyn
Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Thank you so much Carolyn! Your fav is truly an honor! The three days before Easter and Easter morning evoke so many deep emotions for me. I was so hoping the poem would illustrate that emotional roller coaster! Hope you had a wonderful Easter. Sending you blessings of joy!
Merryman Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Fantastic imagery, Sam! My favorite lines are "Heaven's returning scarred prince in a stone womb sanctuary". Happy Easter! Blessings, Kim M
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April 4, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Happy Easter Kim. Thank you so very much. The Saturday between Good Friday and Easter Sunday has always had a sacred silence of anticipation for me. I am so happy that you enoyed this. Sending you joy for the Easter season
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