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In the Hush

In the Hush "It is finished!" over, complete Echoing in the twilight hush On Saturday's holy ground Breathing through candles on the Sabbath table Slowly vibrating to a fevered breath Strong enough to shatter stone And melt iron tipped spears to plowshares; In sacred stillness Centuries of exile emerge from catacombs of somnolence In quiet breaths of quietude's understanding And gather ragged edges of unsettled grieving, To sit resolved with shredded edges, Before the quivering daybreak can exhale Before the Promise of the Ages readies to inhale Sweet breath Mystery of the miraculous dangles over Smiles of silent satisfaction Victory over the absurd re-enters Awakening the soft slumber Of Heaven's returning scarred Prince In a stone womb sanctuary; Death whimpers Forgiveness reunites shallow breathing In the wheeze of asthmatic gasps And readies to explode on gales of the first rays Of rising dawn Piercing sorrow with breezes of wonder! Alleluia!

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Date: 4/7/2021 4:00:00 PM
wow, this is simply wonderful, Sam
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/8/2021 10:38:00 AM
I'm so glad you like it Andrea. That lifts my heart and puts a :) on this face! I had started it last Friday and the concluding stanzas woke me up on Saturday morning! It is one of those poems that seems to have an inner life of its own. Blessings dear friend.
Date: 4/7/2021 6:50:00 AM
Nicely done Sam....Congrats on your win :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/7/2021 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Carol. Sending you Easter blessings :)"
Date: 4/5/2021 8:38:00 AM
Truly a masterful description of the first Easter Sunday, Sam. The "scarred Prince" recalls the nails used to put Christ on the cross. I love this! A new fave for me, Sam. Absolutely beautiful and a poem that touches the reader on many levels. Hope you enjoyed your Easter. Hugs, Carolyn
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/7/2021 9:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Carolyn! Your fav is truly an honor! The three days before Easter and Easter morning evoke so many deep emotions for me. I was so hoping the poem would illustrate that emotional roller coaster! Hope you had a wonderful Easter. Sending you blessings of joy!
Date: 4/3/2021 7:57:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Sam! My favorite lines are "Heaven's returning scarred prince in a stone womb sanctuary". Happy Easter! Blessings, Kim M
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/4/2021 9:08:00 PM
Happy Easter Kim. Thank you so very much. The Saturday between Good Friday and Easter Sunday has always had a sacred silence of anticipation for me. I am so happy that you enoyed this. Sending you joy for the Easter season

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