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In the Hub

IN THE HUB Pounding in the hub of his chest — a ruby, as red as a polished apple. The mellifluous heart of mercy’s chapel. Guardian wings with a royal crest. A multiflora rose adorns the angel’s coat. Rapturous hues viciously protect any threats. With no need to keep up, perfectly set — crowned with a golden halo that floats. The manifest expanse of his wings flutters only for the boy always in trouble. His emboldened hands manage double, this guardian who faithfully clings. 8/21/2019 Writing Challenge 2, August 2019- Enclosed Rhyme Sponsor, Dear Heart

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Date: 8/27/2019 5:25:00 PM
This is beautiful, with my compliments on your win Kim ~ Aloha William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2019 5:31:00 PM
Thank you, William! Aloha!
Date: 8/23/2019 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Kim! I was sure this one would rate higher. : ) xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2019 3:49:00 PM
I was hoping so but we all look at poems differently! Thanks for your vote of confidence! I worked on this one for several days :)
Date: 8/23/2019 12:20:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme, nice write !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Heart (Constance)
Date: 8/23/2019 2:26:00 AM
I cannot fathom an enclosed rhyme any more gloriously written than this gorgeous write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, my glorious friend!
Date: 8/22/2019 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2019 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 8/22/2019 1:53:00 PM
Your imagery is outstanding in this lovely entry Kim. It is sure to be a top winner! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2019 3:07:00 PM
I hope I hope...thank you, Connie!
Date: 8/21/2019 11:18:00 PM
Well written
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2019 11:34:00 PM
Thank you, Kishan!

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