In the Great Expanse of Tomorrow

Shimmering blues catching the light..
Like dew droplets on a chilled morn..
Clouds motionless, filling the sky..
their soft silken shuffle, reflecting upon the silent sea..
Mighty peaks rising from the pebbled shores..
Stretching their ancient bones towards the burning sun...
Scents of pine and wildflowers mixed, floating on the breeze..
Man's footprint here is just that...
A small mark...
Like an ants step on shifting sands...
The earth uncut and unmarked...
Eyes see not what surrounds, they see what is not...
Who stops their churning to witness the dawn?
to watch butterflies dance?
to stand and smile in the rain?
to truly see life and feel alive?
We are disconnected in our connection...
Lost with all roads ahead,
In the great expanse of tomorrow......TAH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/28/2014 9:44:00 AM
Rereading your. fantastic poem.Are you coming back to wriye..?I do wish so.Tnks for reading my poems,a lovely surprise Tah!
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Date: 10/11/2013 2:46:00 PM
I absolutely love to read the written art of a deep poet, who knows how to illustrate, rather than tell, with his words. I am humbled. A very great read that I had to read a second time. I am curious, where are you describing? Alaska? Canada? New Zealand? I want to go wherever it is...and connect with what is.
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Date: 10/11/2013 3:25:00 PM
Christopher, I was looking at a photo from a trip to Glacier Park Montana. A breathtaking scene. I appreciate your comment greatly. I too love the illustrative word(s). Welcome to the site. I wish you the best in your future writes..Tobey
Date: 10/11/2013 9:21:00 AM
Like an ants step on shifting sands We are oh so true so lets dance in the rain before the rain stops its dancing patter.I really loved your poem Tah.Wish you could give us your verses more often and tnks for visiting : )
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