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Agony in the Garden - Wikipedia

In the Garden of Gethsemane

The olive leaves swaying, the air stagnant with despair’s breath,
thy Lord and thy Savior walks as pall approaches, nearing death’s door,
the spirit, ever generous, sleeps whilst the flesh betrays.

Thy flesh's weak, burden with regret, longs to close its worn eyes,
Yet He bidst me, watch with Me for one moment, final, sacred hour,
a torture of love now begins to wash my spirit clean.

He walks a stone's throw further, and I see Him kneel to pray,
thy Lord faces all the darkness, though the daylight seems far away,
I, too, kneel and pray for strength in the shadow of His grace.

The ancient branches angle and twist in silent prayer,
"Not what I will," the Lord whispers, "Let it be thine own will to yield."
The moon, a velvety witness, sees a soul's distressing.

His Lord kneels alone, a bitter cup held in trembling hands,
as the weight of every human sin is grinding on solid ground,
yet, sweat drips down like drops of blood, and still, "Thy will be done.

See thy Lord and thy Savior in such wretched suffering,
but in His pain, yearning emerges; there is no shifting away,
whilst the apostles sleep, one fails in this last company.
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Daniel Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Yep, my favourite example too. Brilliant penning, Hilo:)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Sijo form is a complex yet its outlay is righteous.
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 10:41 AM
This is my favorite of the examples I read for your contest . Nice idea, Hilo, for a contest.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:56 AM
Twas a beautiful submission, I had thought upon its creation, thank you, my friend, Aloha, William.
George Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Though the spirit is willing, the flesh is weak. Like the apostles, we let our Lord suffer all alone. Each time when I think of the scene at Gethsemane, I am overwhelmed by grief and pain leading to repentance. I too have written a poem of this same topic- At Gethsemane. Well done dear Hilo Poet.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 5:08 PM
That's wonderful that you did a piece as well, and I appreciate your beautiful sentiments in its furtherance, Aloha.
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