Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

In the Garden of Eden

In the Garden of Eden, all peace and tranquility
Until Satan in his prideful rebellious season
With his gimmickry introduced sin willingly
In the Garden of Eden

Oh! The separation between God and man_ depletion
The cross held one God/man whose love is affinity
This constant love draws man it's a life saving beacon

God had a plan to save man from his fallibility
There 'pon that cruel cross when it seemed Satan had beaten
Jesus saved man, He lives again_God now our total accessibility
In the Garden of Eden....  

Sponsor: Suzette Crous
Contest: Roundel
Written: May 5th and 6th 2013

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 14, 2013 at 3:45 AM A well written piece. Full of biblical facts. Many congrats on your win in the challenge. AO

Poet Destroyer A May 11, 2013 at 10:34 PM Sara, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win. Take care and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA

Delysia Hendricks May 11, 2013 at 5:37 PM Congratulations on your win with this gem. Well done, Sara. :-)

Connie Gildersleeve May 11, 2013 at 12:55 PM Sara this is a exceptional poem. A complex subject to write. Congratulations!warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May May 11, 2013 at 8:28 AM congrats on a great win Sara

Suzanne Delaney May 11, 2013 at 1:03 AM Congratulations Sara I love the refrain and I believe heaven will be the Garden of Eden. SuZ

Joseph May May 7, 2013 at 2:54 PM nicely penned Sara...best wishes

Artie Beason May 7, 2013 at 8:15 AM Beautifully written love artie

Carol Eastman May 6, 2013 at 3:48 PM A beautifully written piece of art. A wonderful read.

Russell Sivey May 6, 2013 at 6:36 AM You have hit the nail on the head with the splendor of this incredible write! We never will make it back to the garden of Eden unless God will allow us in after we have passed away and our souls are free to roam with Him. Your poem is exquisitely done, I really enjoyed this Roundel...a very difficult form to write, and you have done very awesome in writing it! What a tremendous piece my friend, Great Work!!

Robert Pettit May 5, 2013 at 9:29 PM Philadelphia native Joe Valino (I don't know if he's still living) had a hit song with this title back in the fifties. Good poem about the first few chapters of the Book of Genesis.

Russell Sivey May 5, 2013 at 7:15 PM This is a fantastic start to a wonderful write! I liked what you have written here! I look forward to seeing what you come up with for the ending to this poem, Great Work!!