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In the Garden of Eden

In the Garden of Eden, all peace and tranquility Until Satan in his prideful rebellious season With his gimmickry introduced sin willingly In the Garden of Eden Oh! The separation between God and man_ depletion The cross held one God/man whose love is affinity This constant love draws man it's a life saving beacon God had a plan to save man from his fallibility There 'pon that cruel cross when it seemed Satan had beaten Jesus saved man, He lives again_God now our total accessibility In the Garden of Eden.... Sponsor: Suzette Crous Contest: Roundel Written: May 5th and 6th 2013

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/14/2013 3:45:00 AM

A well written piece. Full of biblical facts. Many congrats on your win in the challenge. AO

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 10:34:00 PM

Sara, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win. Take care and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/11/2013 5:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this gem. Well done, Sara. :-)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/11/2013 12:55:00 PM

Sara this is a exceptional poem. A complex subject to write. Congratulations!warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2013 8:28:00 AM

congrats on a great win Sara

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/11/2013 1:03:00 AM

Congratulations Sara I love the refrain and I believe heaven will be the Garden of Eden. SuZ

Joseph May

Date: 5/7/2013 2:54:00 PM

nicely penned Sara...best wishes

Artie Beason

Date: 5/7/2013 8:15:00 AM

Beautifully written love artie

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/6/2013 3:48:00 PM

A beautifully written piece of art. A wonderful read.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/6/2013 6:36:00 AM

You have hit the nail on the head with the splendor of this incredible write! We never will make it back to the garden of Eden unless God will allow us in after we have passed away and our souls are free to roam with Him. Your poem is exquisitely done, I really enjoyed this Roundel...a very difficult form to write, and you have done very awesome in writing it! What a tremendous piece my friend, Great Work!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/5/2013 9:29:00 PM

Philadelphia native Joe Valino (I don't know if he's still living) had a hit song with this title back in the fifties. Good poem about the first few chapters of the Book of Genesis.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/5/2013 7:15:00 PM

This is a fantastic start to a wonderful write! I liked what you have written here! I look forward to seeing what you come up with for the ending to this poem, Great Work!!